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Come into my parlor . . . by =thenumber19:iconthenumber19:



Come into my parlor
I’ve got some time to spare
There’s a pleasure in my eyes
There’s a wanting in your stare

Sit inside my parlor
I’ll give you all you need
You’ll have no want unanswered
You’ll have no word to heed

Lay inside my parlor
Lean unto your sigh
Said the lover to his love
Said the spider to the fly
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Inspired by =Mercuralis' Come Into My Parlor

Revised from its entrance into said deviant's contest

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:iconmelancholieschild:
O_O My dear.. that's amazing!!!
You have a really big talent in writing poems :)
I'll watch u <3

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あい - うんどんこん - こうわ - げんじゅつ

Photography: ~almostseraphic
:iconthenumber19:
Ah, do you here that, muse? She likes you!

Thank you for the comment, the fav, and most of all, the devwatch!

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I'll never forgive SMeyer. I got stabbed in the arm with a pencil because of that pear-shaped bitch. :| ~juliaGENOCIDE

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:iconmelancholieschild:
You're very welcome =) Thanks for adding me, too! :rose:

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あい - うんどんこん - こうわ - げんじゅつ

Photography: ~almostseraphic
:iconsonohtora:
was this the 1 that cured my stomach ach?

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Soundwave superior Autobots inferior
:iconthenumber19:
You said, and I quote: "This is the best poem I've read in a long time."

As for curing stomach aches, I hope it did.

I guess that would mean I write, like . . . Jesus poems or something. :D

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I'll never forgive SMeyer. I got stabbed in the arm with a pencil because of that pear-shaped bitch. :| ~juliaGENOCIDE

RAGE CONTEST: [link]
:iconsonohtora:
lol jesus poems

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Soundwave superior Autobots inferior
:icondoerflere:
I love this one! I think I read it last semester, but it's one of my favorites! Once again, you have an incredible talent for parallelism. And clever little twists at the end...
Lovely work, as usual.
:iconthenumber19:
I heart paralellism.

Clever? I don't know about that, especially when referring to "twists."

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I'll never forgive SMeyer. I got stabbed in the arm with a pencil because of that pear-shaped bitch. :| ~juliaGENOCIDE

RAGE CONTEST: [link]
:iconhindered-mind:
I really like this one. Last two lines are very nicely done.

Great job!

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Life is easy; it's dying that's hard.

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